Born with curly hair
Answer to mom's prayer
Who always kept it oiled
So it isn't spoiled
I was...her girl with the curls
The touch of her fingers
rubbing though each hair strand
She adorned my hair with ribbons
colorful clips or a hair band
I was...her girl with the curls
After I left school
I was expected to be cool
My short and trendy hair styles
Always got me smiles
I still was...her girl with the curls
My hair got playful and flirty
When I reached my thirty
My hair tied in a perfect bun, I was a pretty bride
She looked at me and her eyes filled with pride
Life became busy when I became a wife
Then two lovely kids came into my life
I still cared for my tresses
By staying away from stresses
I am a woman of my own
With years I have grown
While my hair has begun to turn grey
To my mother, I want to say
I was and I still am...her girl with the curls
Answer to mom's prayer
Who always kept it oiled
So it isn't spoiled
I was...her girl with the curls
The touch of her fingers
rubbing though each hair strand
She adorned my hair with ribbons
colorful clips or a hair band
I was...her girl with the curls
After I left school
I was expected to be cool
My short and trendy hair styles
Always got me smiles
I still was...her girl with the curls
My hair got playful and flirty
When I reached my thirty
My hair tied in a perfect bun, I was a pretty bride
She looked at me and her eyes filled with pride
Life became busy when I became a wife
Then two lovely kids came into my life
I still cared for my tresses
By staying away from stresses
I am a woman of my own
With years I have grown
While my hair has begun to turn grey
To my mother, I want to say
I was and I still am...her girl with the curls
And boys with curls? As I child often I wished I had curly hair and not straight (like the wig worn by Shahrukh khan in dildaara song) :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
@ Thanks Sunil Deepak. Nice to know a man's viewpoint on curly hair :-)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. It is like my own story. Best of luck Bindu. I have participated too. I hope we all win. :)
ReplyDeleteYour tale has no curls ...
ReplyDeleteIt is "straight" from the heart :-)
very nice :) has a charm to it :D
ReplyDeleteLoved the last para very much... I too have curly hair and I have grown to love it now. LOL
ReplyDeletehttp://chaptersfrommylife.blogspot.com/2011/10/story-of-prodigal-hair.html
touchy , well chosen magnificent words.
ReplyDeletebest wishes.
Poetry requires more intense research and phrasing. it's easy to pen down what comes to mind in a flow, but poetry is something tad tough and different.choosing the perfect rhyming word, is quite a task.
ReplyDeletekudos to your effort.
hearty sincere wishes.
Farila - Thanks a lot. To be frank, I like curly hair more, the reason, the soft and silky straight hair look attractive but it is the curls which add to the personality
ReplyDeletePramod Ji - thanks a lot for your sincere encouraging comment. Best of Luck to you for the contest.
ReplyDeleteWoah...this is something that has the right emotions to strike a cord somewhere. Very very very nice. All the very best:)
ReplyDeletehow r ur kids hair?? theirs too curly?? curls are gud :)
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Pooja - thank you so much!
ReplyDelete'I was and still I am' very beautiful poem.. All the best to you..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
@ Someone is Special - Thanks so much. What you wrote in quotes seems like a good title for the poem :-)
ReplyDeleteReally very interesting blog post :-) loved the post :-)
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